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[征文作品] 【色城２０１０文心雕龙】】（【么么么么么么么么

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舔烟纸这个小细节让人物的形象真实了不少，可惜限于时间作者写的很匆忙，不错的框架可惜。提个建议，把女主角设定为因为寂寞（或是和人打赌，玩真心话大冒险）随机打电话聊天怎么样

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